A few words about us...
Thursday, September 2, 2010
In the past few weeks I was writing a personal story. When I finished I had to look at my writing and edit it. It was a little bit hard because we had to have over 20 I, me, my. Well actually I didn't have to improve that bit. Sometimes I got stuck becausse I had to describe my feelings and hook in the reader...but I got though it. I got a little bit of help from my friend. I learned something new and that was my similes, metaphors and onamatopoeia.