Meleseini's Reflection

In the past few weeks I was writing a personal story. When I finished I had to look at my writing and edit it. It was a little bit hard because we had to have over 20 I, me, my. Well actually I didn't have to improve that bit. Sometimes I got stuck becausse I had to describe my feelings and hook in the reader...but I got though it. I got a little bit of help from my friend. I learned something new and that was my similes, metaphors and onamatopoeia.

Scary Movie by Meleseini

Watching a scary movie is like a monster biting your head off. Crack crack my heart was about to hatch I feel so terrified. When the commercial break came on it was a relief. I could hear the Warehouse song came on it sounded smooth usually it is loud but it was blissful. Anyway if I told you I think you will start sleeping back to the story now.

When the movie came back on that’s when I knew the commercial break was off. I felt like someone was stalking me. I wanted to run, so I ran as fast as I could to my room. I slammed the door and started shaking like I was in the Antarctica. I think you might freeze if I had told you, let’s continue.

I started to calm down and that’s when I got out of my room. I asked my sister if it said anything on the TV? She replied it was going to be continued…don’t you feel like watching some more? I think it’s enough… don’t you think?