- use more adjectives to describe the characters
- create a more exciting 'hook in' to captivate the reader
A journey through the lives of Room 9. What we learn, how we think and who we are!
A few words about us...
- Room 9
- We are a Year 5 and 6 class at Bairds Mainfreight Primary School. We love all kinds of sports, especially rugby, softball and cricket. We love to learn and have fun at the same time! In our class we have Maori, Cook Island, Samoan and Tongan children.
Tuesday, October 19, 2010
Narrative
Taylor and Litia are reading a narrative. They are looking for the features and giving advice on NEXT STEPS...here is what they said:
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Narrative. Litia,
Taylor
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