Talu's Writing

In writing, Talu has been working on getting his ideas down independently. He did really well on this piece of writing and would like to share it with you.

Vaietu's Personal Writing - First Draft

I have only been at Bairds Mainfreight for 2 weeks. I think that this is the best school ever that I've been to. During writing I have learnt a lot of new things like describing my feelings using adjectives and lots more that will make my work exciting.

Scary Movie by Meleseini

Watching a scary movie is like a monster biting your head off. Crack crack my heart was about to hatch I feel so terrified. When the commercial break came on it was a relief. I could hear the Warehouse song came on it sounded smooth usually it is loud but it was blissful. Anyway if I told you I think you will start sleeping back to the story now.

When the movie came back on that’s when I knew the commercial break was off. I felt like someone was stalking me. I wanted to run, so I ran as fast as I could to my room. I slammed the door and started shaking like I was in the Antarctica. I think you might freeze if I had told you, let’s continue.

I started to calm down and that’s when I got out of my room. I asked my sister if it said anything on the TV? She replied it was going to be continued…don’t you feel like watching some more? I think it’s enough… don’t you think?